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I am with you

18 Jul
I see you, can you hear me
I’m with you every day
I hold you close beside me
In a soft breeze I hear you pray
I touch you, can you feel me
In tender loving care
In raindrops falling softly
I am with you every where
I love you, you’re not forsaken
I whisper to your heart
In warmth and love unshaken
I’ve been with you from the start
I bring colours, can you see
In a rainbow in the sky
I bring you closer unto me
I am with you, I’m close by
Jeanie McBain
 
15 Comments

Posted by on July 18, 2011 in Poetry

 

15 responses to “I am with you

  1. Kim Nelson

    July 18, 2011 at 2:26 pm

    This is lovely, Jeanie. Surely tells of great faith.

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 18, 2011 at 2:38 pm

      Thank you Kim, I hope it is off some help to those who read it πŸ™‚

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  2. liv2write2day

    July 18, 2011 at 3:20 pm

    Very comforting, gentle reminder that we are not alone.

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 18, 2011 at 3:28 pm

      Thank you live2write2day, for your comment, and for visiting πŸ™‚

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  3. Jingle

    July 19, 2011 at 1:21 am

    reassuring words, well done.

    πŸ™‚

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  4. Ravenblack

    July 19, 2011 at 1:38 am

    Comforting words. πŸ™‚ Thanks for the poem.

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  5. Reflections

    July 19, 2011 at 1:45 am

    Pleasantly inviting. Love the reminders.

    Thanks also for your comments over at my place. It’s always nice to meet new people.

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 19, 2011 at 8:19 am

      Hello, Reflections, thank you for your kind words. πŸ™‚

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  6. becca givens

    July 19, 2011 at 4:21 am

    A beacon of inspiration and hope!! Thank you for sharing!

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  7. Explorations in Sacred Space

    July 19, 2011 at 3:44 pm

    A strong faith is a good thing and you’ve written lyrically about it here. Lovely.

    JamieDedes

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 19, 2011 at 3:50 pm

      thank you Jamie and thank you for taking the time to read my poem.

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  8. mindlovemisery

    July 22, 2011 at 4:05 pm

    Such a sweet and touching poem

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