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Lazy afternoon

02 Jul

Ironing all done and put away

Household chores all done for the day

Sitting and resting with  a cup of tea

It’s my time precious just for me

 

The sun is shining birds fly high

Lazy clouds float way up in the sky

A sigh of contentment a beautiful day

Stress has gone just pushed away

 

Closing my eyes listening to sounds

Listening to insects buzzing around

Glorious day don’t let it end soon

Just drifting away on a lazy afternoon

 

 
31 Comments

Posted by on July 2, 2011 in Poetry

 

31 responses to “Lazy afternoon

  1. Jack Edwards

    July 2, 2011 at 2:40 pm

    Strong rhyme and a great poem.

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  2. Jingle

    July 2, 2011 at 2:43 pm

    amazing…..
    glad to see you in.

    got you in the collection via linkz, have fun reading.

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 2, 2011 at 2:49 pm

      Thank you Jingle, I am having a great time reading the wonderful poetry , they are inspiring, what a great opportunity this is 🙂

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  3. Cassiopeia Rises

    July 2, 2011 at 2:53 pm

    Lovely poem and imagery. Well done.

    Melanie

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  4. Miriam Sagan

    July 2, 2011 at 3:16 pm

    Feels good–doesn’t it! Time for a poem…

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 2, 2011 at 3:17 pm

      Hi Miriam, yes it certainly does 🙂 thank you for dropping by

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  5. mindlovemisery

    July 2, 2011 at 3:54 pm

    Such a relaxing, meditative poem. I could use a moment like that right now listening to chaos in my house lol

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 2, 2011 at 4:27 pm

      Thank you, I needed that moment today and I enjoyed it 🙂 Thank you for dropping in 🙂

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  6. wordcoaster

    July 2, 2011 at 8:21 pm

    Hmm, like a cool breeze and a sip of lemonade on a hot summer’s day. “Stress has gone just pushed away” 🙂

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  7. Jacqui Binford-Bell

    July 3, 2011 at 10:47 am

    I lovely poem that speaks of a simple time we often think we cannot recapture. Nice.

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 3, 2011 at 1:55 pm

      Hi Jacqui thank you for your kind words and thank you for visiting.

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  8. cinnamon blues

    July 3, 2011 at 10:12 pm

    Really enjoyed your poem.

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 3, 2011 at 10:45 pm

      Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for vising 🙂

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  9. Uneven Stephen

    July 4, 2011 at 2:32 pm

    Awesome, nice poem! We could all use more lazy afternoons, and you’ve captured this sentiment very well.

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 4, 2011 at 2:41 pm

      Thank you Stephen for your comment and for visiting 🙂

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  10. Eric Campanano

    July 7, 2011 at 4:47 am

    There were three different stanzas and I felt three different feelings. Loved it!

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 7, 2011 at 5:11 am

      Thank you Eric for your comment and for visiting. Glad you liked my Lazy Afternoon 🙂

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  11. Andy

    July 8, 2011 at 9:52 pm

    We need more of those lazy afternoons.

    Wonderful imagery.

    Thanks for sharing.

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 8, 2011 at 10:11 pm

      Thank you Andy, I tried for another lazy afternoon today but, it didn’t quite work out 🙂 Maybe sometime soon

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  12. Raivenne

    July 9, 2011 at 10:06 pm

    This is wonderfully lyrical. I can almost hear it as a song. Nicely done!

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    • Jeanie McBain

      July 9, 2011 at 10:12 pm

      thank you Raivenne for your kind comments and for visiting 🙂

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    July 21, 2011 at 6:13 am

    Good points

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